Defending Home

My contribution to the Triggerstreet collaborative screenplay titled Hate.



INT. SQUAT ENTRYWAY - DAY

An iron gate with a rusted chain and heavy padlock guards the stairway into a dilapidated apartment building.

At the top of a short flight of stairs a dark wooden door, pulled off its hinges, leans against the frame.

Plaster, painted an ugly late-communist shade of yellow, cracks away from crumbling brick walls.

From behind the door, JIRI emerges with a ladder and a toolbelt. He runs a hand through his limp black mohawk, sets the door in its frame, and attaches the lower hinge.

(O.S.) A loud slam followed by muffled cursing.

Jiri jumps down the steps and peers out the gate.

Cobblestones line the floor of the entryway before the gate. The graffiti is a mixture of the political and the obscene - anarchy signs and cunts.

One end of the entryway is open to a courtyard enclosed with a two-story brick wall. At the other, a pair of heavy doors shelter the space from the street.

The doors open and JACK (40, American) steps in, walking with the especial purposefulness of a drunk attempting to look sober. He cradles something inside his motorcycle jacket, and gestures for BESNIK to follow him.

Besnik's dark hair and moustache are streaked with gray, as is the dingy black coat that tops his workman's jumpsuit. He shakes his head, and steps into the entry.
JIRI
Jezis! Drzhobo.

JACK
Are you telling me to shut up? Me? Do you forget who I am?

JIRI
Tak fine: drzhobo, Sensei.

He bows slightly.
JACK
That's more like it. Come, have a drink with me and...

BESNIK
Besnik.

Jack pulls a bottle of Becherovka out of his jacket.
JIRI
OK. Let me finish this.

He turns back to his work, and nods at someone coming down the stairs.

SARA (26, American) sticks her head around the corner.
SARA
I knew that was you, Jack.

JACK
Saranova!

SARA
You're drunk.

JACK
And I'll still kick your ass.

SARA
Ah, yes, drunken master.

JACK
Aw, you speak so sweetly to me, my darling. Sara, me girl, come have a drink with your husband for it is cold in our abode and I must numb myself before I sleep.

Sara steps around Jiri on his ladder and unlocks the padlock.
JACK
This is Besnik, he works across the street, on the restoration.
Jiri hops down from the ladder. Offers Besnik a cigarette.

BESNIK
Yes. I am a mason.

He takes the cigarette, lights it, and then offers one from his own pack to Jiri, and to Sara.

JIRI
What will it be?

Sara declines the cigarette, but Jiri accepts with a nod.
BESNIK
A bank, I'm afraid.

JIRI
That's not good. We're not quite legal yet. The neighbors don't like us. A bank...They will not like a squat across the street.

LATER - DAY

The door at the top of the landing is attached now. It's been painted bright blue.

(O.S.) A loud slam, followed by the sound of several pairs of booted feet.
Police in black riot gear storm the building.

One officer has a bullhorn.
OFFICER WITH BULLHORN
(in Czech)
Police. Open the gate.

Jiri opens his door, sees them, and immediately runs further up into the building.
JIRI
(O.S.)
Polizei!
OFFICER WITH BULLHORN
Have your identity ready.

Another officer with a large pair of bolt cutters snaps the lock. The gate swings forward, and the police rush up the stairs.

Out in the courtyard, Sara and Jack jump from a window onto the top of a low building. Sara reaches behind her and catches a baby. Another couple drops onto the roof, and all of them run across it, and disappear into a neighboring yard.

LATER - NIGHT

KAREL, his hoodie up, drinks a beer and sits on the steps just inside the gate, which is held closed with a new lock. A candle burns beside him.

Jack and Sara return.

Karel hands them keys and pulls out a smoke.
KAREL
We had to get you out. We knew they would be looking for you.

JACK
Why?

KAREL
In Germany, they claimed foreigners in the squats were proof of an international conspiracy. The squat is not illegal, but conspiracy...

He opens the gate.


LATER - NIGHT

The couple with the baby return. HELENA sings a Russian lullaby to the baby in IVAN's arms.

They see the new lock on the gate.
HELENA
Ahoj!

She walks to the courtyard, and from the shadows jumps a SKINHEAD BOY with a bat, followed by two others.

They knock her down, and kick her.
IVAN
Skinheady!

A boy rushes Ivan.
SKINHEAD BOY
(in Czech)
No foreigners in our fatherland.

He turns around and covers the baby with his body as the bat strikes him across the back.

Footsteps on the stairs. Half a dozen anarchists come running down, shouting.

Helena tries push herself up to stand, but one of the skinheads kicks her arms out from under her.

She screams as her arm breaks.

The skinheads run away, taking advantage of the moment it takes to get the padlock open to get away.


LATER - DAY

Jiri, Karel, and Ivan stand with a few other at attention in a martial arts stance, facing Jack. Some of them wear a black gi under their hoodies.

Helena, her arm in a cast, watches.

They go through their forms in pairs, sparring. Jiri and Karel are good. The others are less practiced.

Jack walks through them and corrects their form.
JACK
Stop, stop.

They stop.

He hands a stick to Karel, and lights a cig. Karel swings at him, and he deflects it without even turning to look, then quickly strikes Karel, stopping his fist less than an inch from the kid's nose.
JACK
This is real. Not something to look cool. Do every movement knowing that you are being attacked. Next time, we will be ready. Now, again.

They spar again, this time with renewed focus.


LATER - DAY

Snow drifts into the entryway from the courtyard. Karel and another kid play guitars and thrash their heads, while a girl with pink dredlocks dances. Beer bottles have started to pile up around them.

A pounding on the street door, and it flies open. The police are back. The kids hold up their hands.


LATER - NIGHT

The gate is on the ground, the hinges cut and the frame pulled from the wall.
Anarchists sit on the stairs, holding bats, sticks, and flashlights. Some are in the courtyard. They are on alert.
JIRI
(in Czech)
The fascist police, and their friends the skinheads may force us out before the bank opens, but this is our home.

JACK
Put out those lights. Get ready.

The anarchists disappear into the dark.


LATER - NIGHT

The street door creaks open. Five skinheads come in, quietly. One reaches down and picks up a loose cobblestone. One opens the blue door and Jiri and Jack come out at them.

The skinheads are surrounded.

Someone puts on blaring punk music, and shouts of "skinheady" and "fascisti" punctuate the fighting.

The skinheads make their way back down the stairs, noses bloodied and eyes blackened. More anarchists come at them from the courtyard. Jack gives one a kick that makes him fall and hit his head on the broken gate.

The Skinhead Boy that attacked Ivan tries to help his fallen comrade up, but the anarchists pummel them.
JACK
Let him go!

Reluctantly, everyone backs off and the skinheads limp away.


LATER - NIGHT

Besnik plays a soulful violin, as Jack, Sara, and the others pass a bottle. Snow catches the moonlight in the courtyard.

Karel fingers his guitar.
KAREL
Can you play anything a little more exciting than that gypsy stuff?

SARA
I like it.

KAREL
You Americans. We have a saying:
(in Czech)
The only thing stranger than a foreigner is a gypsy.

SARA
What do you mean by that?

KAREL
I just want some good punk music!

The other anarchists shout in agreement.
BESNIK
So, get up here!

Karel stands beside him, and Besnik begins strumming his violin like a guitar.


LATER - NIGHT

It's still and quiet. The street door opens, and the Skinhead Boy backs into the entryway, dragging a body.

He lays it beside the broken gate. It's Besnik, unconscious or worse. Blood shines in matted hair on his forehead.

The Skinhead Boy pulls out a gun, and hides around the corner in the courtyard.
Jack and Sara come down the stairs.
JACK
Wait, I have to piss.

SARA
You drunk.

JACK
Yup.

She crosses her arms, and notices Besnik on the ground.

Jack unbuttons his pants as he walks.

Sara bends down, touching Besnik's forehead.
SARA
Jack. Oh no.

When Jack turns to see what's wrong, Skinhead Boy steps out.
SKINHEAD BOY
(in Czech)
Death to gypsies and foreigners.

Jack looks down the barrel of the gun.

Gunfire. Blackness.

Sara screams.

Oscar Trends

Stumbled on this site today:
http://www.filmsite.org/oscars.html

A fascinating breakdown of the nominations and winners for the major awards. Looks like your best chance of getting nominated for a Best Actress award is to play a mute hooker with one leg.

Most of the films that have won Best Picture have been adaptations.

Cool stuff.

Sex Toys!

Many people, even in the state of Texas, may not have realized that sex toys were illegal to sell in this state. Sure, they were sold at stores like Condom Sense, but technically they were presented as "novelties" or "educational" or (my personal favorite) cake toppers.

It was legal to own them, but owning more than 6 automatically put you in violation of the law. Apparently no one buys that many for their own use, so if you have 7 then you must be intending to promote their use and sale.

However, this law has now been overturned.

So we can buy and sell Dildos, Vibrators, Butt Plugs and more, with no fear of prosecution.

Coming Soon to a Theater...or not


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Goonies of the Carribean







Brokeback to the Future







Sleepless in Seattle: The Horror Movie







The Shining: A Romantic Comedy





Depression and Creativity

The death of Heath Ledger, whether or not it's actually attributable in any way to his depression, sparked a few conversations about the connection between creativity and depression.

This is a subject I've given a lot of thought to, because for most of my life I've based a large portion of my identity on being a poet - and poets are so frequently associated with this romanticized view of depression.

Does an artist need to suffer? Do they need it in order to have the material to produce art? To have the impetus? The insight?

Does being mentally ill provide an advantage to an artist? Does it allow them to step outside normal boundaries and access greater creativity? Does it inspire them? Drive them?

Over the years, I've had different answers to these questions for myself. I do think that it's hard to produce art if your life has always been easy, if your challenges have been small and easily overcome, if you've lived inside the "norm" comfortably.

In terms of suffering due to external causes (as opposed to mental illness, there's a saying that it's impossible to create art when you're starving, or the idea that art is a luxury... yet I've witnessed some of the most inspired work from people in duress, people on the edge.

I'm reminded of a singer I saw on the streets of Prague when I was homeless. I was begging for spare change in one of the main squares, it was early winter, and the first real snow had fallen. A pale, thin woman in a cheap quilted coat stood near one of the churches, a man beside her with a little tape player. He set the player down, pushed play and the tinny sound barely reached a few feet... and then she began to sing. Not simply sing, but reach up to heaven with her voice, the purest and most passionate soprano I have ever heard. It was simply transcendent.

A few months later, in the early spring - I saw the woman again. She had a better coat, more color in her cheeks, and the weather was turning warmer - and her voice, though still accomplished and beautiful, lacked that extra dimension.

On the other hand, being too far outside society for too long is more often a disadvantage - "outsider art" has it's own appellation because it's simply not as accomplished as other forms. Being pushed to extremes is more often a distraction, or can wear down an artist until they haven't the energy to produce anything.

And what about mental illness?

This article mentions the "creative fire," and associates mild mania (specifically with bipolar disorder) with creative intensity - but is that an accurate association? the specific characteristics they describe are, indeed, also components of what is sometimes called the "creative trance" which many artists enter when they create. A hyper-sensitivity to stimuli, especially emotional stimuli; lowered inhibitions; and the tendency to become intensely focused while working. I find that those are actually part of the reason I sometimes avoid writing - especially the absorption. When I get into a project I have to allow things to effect me more deeply, to drop my inhibitions, and I become intensely absorbed...and it can interfere with my ability to function. During my most creative periods I have trouble keeping a job, embarrassed myself and done damage to professional and personal relationships by simply saying too much because I lose my sense of what's socially appropriate, and I had difficulty relating to others in a rational manner. So yes, I would agree that there is some level of social dysfunction associated with intense creativity... but is it an advantage, and is it necessary?

Most people who have bipolar disorder or major depression do not become great artists - so it's not as though these illnesses automatically will make you a genius.

An article on the APA website suggests that part of the connection may be self-reflection. Both creative persons and people with depression exhibit a higher degree of introspection than average. So it may be that the conditions which encourage and develop creativity also tend to encourage the development of depression or manic-depression.

Another factor, as mentioned here, is that creativity can be stifled. It's dismissed, or put down, or set aside for "real" problems. And that stifling of potential can lead to depression. Another article discusses this in a more complex manner, and even suggests that some of the characteristics of creativity can be mistaken for mania.

Mary Rocamora, who counsels gifted people, and heads The Rocamora School in Los Angeles school, which provides awareness training classes for gifted and talented adults, says those "who are passionately engaged with their talent but are constantly separated from the creative experience by relentless self-criticism, self-doubt, and feelings of inferiority often suffer from depression and the periodic shutting down of their spontaneous creative impulses. The drive to express their inner creativity is heightened in many gifted individuals, and when the drive to create meets the wall of shame, it implodes into numbness, rage, depression, and hopelessness." She also notes that it is well known among researchers of the gifted, talented and creative that these individuals "exhibit greater intensity and increased levels of emotional, imaginational, intellectual, sensual and psychomotor excitability, and that this is a normal pattern of development." Dr. Linda Silverman, Director of the Institute for the Study of Advanced Development in Denver, has also cautioned that this higher level of excitability and intensity may be perceived and misdiagnosed as manic depression.


But the article I found most helpful was this one: An interview with a doctor who did an empirical study on creativity and mental illness, and so is speaking from facts rather than supposition. In his study, around 70% of the writers had depression, which is just massive. However, he noted that during a depressive or manic phase, an individual is not motivated or organized enough to actually create. It is only after they emerge from that state that they are able to use those experiences as fuel. He addresses the fear that some have of medication stifling their creativity with examples, and states that creative people are more functional and more able to actually produce work while their illness is under control. He also notes that besides major Depression and Bipolar disorder, schizophrenia has a link to creativity - but once again, not when it is out of control.

Which makes me optimistic.

Does an artists need to suffer? I would say that yes, they do - they need it as fuel. But who, in their life, has never suffered? And that suffering, like branches gathered in the woods during a storm, is only useful to light the creative fires once it has cured and dried, after the rain is gone.

Movie Character Careers

I've noticed that there are certain professions or callings that are over-represented in film. For example - there are far more architects in the movies, as a percentage, than there are in real life.

This is just a list, for my own benefit - because I know that I am attracted more to certain of these as well, and it would be helpful to consider more characters who work in other areas.

Actors/Actresses
Directors, Producers
Agents (for actors, musicians, writers)
Architects
Publishers
Journalists and Writers (especially struggling poets and novelists)
Musicians
Teachers
Secret Agents/Spies
Assassins/Hit Men/Vampire or Monster Hunters/Bounty Hunters
Waitresses
Kings, Knights
Icy or Evil Queens, Lonely Princesses
High School Students
Psychologists/Psychiatrists (usually supporting)
Doctors
Politicians
Bartenders (usually minor characters)
Experimental Scientists
Damaged Veterans
Anthropologists
Scholars/Criminologists
Police Officers/Guards
TV or Radio Talk Show Hosts
CEOs/Vice Presidents of multi-billion dollar companies
Lawyers/Heads of Law Firms
Prostitutes
Drug Dealers


Now, here are some links about careers and statistics:
Bureau of Labor Statistics
here's a list of occupations from the same source
and here is a .pdf of occupational shares
Fastsest Growing Jobs AZ
(A surprising number of medical professions there - but nicely specific ones, nto just your usual surgeon or GP)
America's Most Admired Professions - from Forbes
Interestingly actors are among the least prestigious/admired though not as low as business executives, stockbrokers and real estate agents. Many of the careers in my list are among the top: Firefighter, Doctor, Nurse, Scientist, Teacher are the top 5. Celebrities, Lawyers, and Accountants have fallen in popularity, while Military Officers and Farmers have risen.

EDIT: One more - I e-mailed the BLS and asked where to find a list of the most common occupation across all fields - and they pointed me here. They are downloadable excel files, and the the first link, 'National Cross-Industry Estimates' is the one I wanted. Column D lists total employment, so you just have to sort by that column.

Pretty cool stuff.

Science Fiction is Alive and Kicking

Sometimes a film writer pens something dumb enough it makes me wanna smack 'em. This article in EW is one of those.

I do agree, there are a lot of science fiction movies that seem to lack an original take on the future, that seem to dig up the same old ideas that have been fueling the genre since the '40s, that are re-makes and adaptations... of course, that is true for most of the movies being made today, regardless of genre. A lack of originality in this season's blockbusters is only evidence of the cowardice of studios and producers, of the general trend for big money to play things safe and forget that what made Movie X a hit wasn't that it had such and such special effect, or a particular concept - but that it was a great story with engaging characters told in a fresh yet engaging manner.

Of course, it's clear that Mark Harris is not a huge fan of the genre, or he never would have called it sci-fi, which is pronounced "skiffy" by the fans, and considered a sneering and marginalizing abbreviation. The correct term is "SF." At least, that's what my friends in the 90's said when I was in a writer's group with some serious aficionados and players in the field (including the then editor of F& SF.) I admit that my own leanings are more toward horror and fantasy, in particular magical realism along the lines of John Crowley - but I am familiar with Science Fiction enough to know the conventions of the genre.

The author points to 2001 as re-defining the genre, as if a movie of that caliber gets made more than once in a generation - but also ignoring the fact that there have been genre-definers made since then, in particular the Matrix Trilogy.

Yes, it's been a while since AI, ExistenZ, and Dark City. But what about V for Vendetta? Not good enough? Serenity and Children of Men are among the best SF films ever made. And before you dismiss those because one was based on a TV series (but a recent one) and the other on a book (though loosely) note that the author of the article lists 3:10 to Yuma and No Country as evidence of great and fresh things happening in the Western genre.

How about something completely original? Take a look at Paprika, a great piece of anime. If you want interesting and unique ideas about the future, anime is a good place to look. Then there's Jathia’s Wager, a fascinating concept that seems to be a sort of choose your own adventure for the digital age. I am sure there are also original ideas being made cheaply and shown online for free, as fans of SF tend to be drawn to new technologies.

Mr. Harris also makes the mistake of limiting SF to films depicting the future. Some consider Donnie Darko an SF film. Then there's Eternal Sunshine, which, since the plot relies on a new technology is indisputably science fiction... and how about The Prestige? Not ground-breaking, but a decent movie certainly, and despite being set in the past, again, the centrality if science to the plot makes it SF.

I do agree, that more originality is needed. That new ideas that derive from someplace besides old books, TV shows and movies are essential not only to science fiction, but to film in general. I just think that those things are out there - and as DVDs and the internet continue to erode the success of the 80's style blockbuster, film companies will seek them out - just as they had to when television threatened the movie business.